I liked this one too...all your stuff is awesome! The title and theme reminds me a little bit of Arwen's theme with the Evenstar; I don't know why. I really like the phrasing and words you use; somehow they make it feel like it's not really a star you're talking to, it's someone. Is that what you intended, or am I reading my own stuff into it? Anyway, it was great, and you need to keep writing! ~The Empress ;-)

Lovely poem. NIcely phrased, and greta job ryhming!

very nice. it has a pretty rhythm to it when you read it. :)

Sweet but strangely sad in a way. Moving too but I don't know why it's so.