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| Cori 2006-11-30 ch 1, anon. | abusePrettiness...this poem made me happy. I've noticed in your other works as well that you're really good at symbols: you can take an ordinary object and put so much meaning into it. I liked this one especially because I love flowers. Write more! ~The Empress |
| Silver rainfall 2006-11-29 ch 1, | abuseI loved it! |
| moonlitrainfall 2006-11-29 ch 1, | abuseThat was a really nice peom! I love the details you gave me. Keep it up! *smiles* |
| ShadeOfSolace 2006-11-29 ch 1, | abuseNice poem. I especially like the slight rhymes of see and mystery, be and humanity. I like the idea of imperfections too, because most people associate roses with something flawless. Good job! -ShadeOfSolace |