It was sad. I don't have any other words to describe it. It was like a new-age twist on Romeo and Juliet. Very well written.

GIVE ME BACK MY JAPANESE DICTIONARY, DANGIT!

REVIEW MY STORIES, DANGIT!

Did I just say stories? Oops... Um...

M KNOWS NOTHING! (Or does she...? *Shifty eyes*)

HAPPY BIRTHDAY! (It's tommarrow, but I don't care.)

The real reason we let Uke-Mochi write the thingy: I'm the only other writer (Go read my fanfiction!) and I can't write angst worth crap.

Or can I?... *More shifty eyes* You saw nothing!

I'm really weird. I'm also UM's only friend who does NOT like yaoi/yuri. I think.

-Nailohi13 (AKA Nailo-chan)

PS. Happy Yule!

PPS. Maybe I should get an account here... Dump my poetry in it... Yeah.

PS. Mom and I are making cookies! WOOT! (I might save you people some... )

PS. You forgot to put "PORN!" in the quotes part of your profile. XD

PS. Soo.. maanyy... PS's...

PS. Yes, this is my longest review anywhere. Feel proud.

PS. Ya know the part of my profile that mentions dried mangos? I'm eating them now. I want pie.

Hey, interesting story. Cursed, hm? I feel bad for him; he killed himself because he cursed his love and she died and he became depressed and all. Well, at least, he joined her in heaven or something, right?
(You got a lot of dedications! 0.0 lol)

omg. that is the most coolest suicide ever! can you imagine what his body would look like to the people on the streets! anywho, very well written. you have great talent and high potential as a writer. keep it up and never stop, no matter what life throws your way!

"This one could sing like angles, compose harmonies so sweet they bring the most hardened of people to their knees, and could rip hearts out of women with ease, a mere spoken word could do it." This is in the beginning. I think you meant angels instead of angles. Very well-written. BTW, flames aren't very constructive on this site. If you ask for flames people will be like "I HATE THE F!#%^&* OUT OF YOUR A@#$%^& STORY!" Not very constructive. Haha. Well, good story, very fast-paced.