oh wow, thats a great poem.

nothing to really say as it all makes sense, and is something everyone feels at one point or another

Hey, I like this one! :) Pretty much I just like the word "moot", so I'm happy you used it. ^_^;

Hmm. I'm not a big fan of the rhyme scheme ... I like the concept of the poem, but I don't like the rhyming, really. Dunno. The mater in "Temptation's never been quite like this" doesn't quite fit, and that throws it off too. I really like the concept, but I think it could be written in a different way.

wow Andy that amazing! it kinda reminds me of a few memories...though i'm not gonna say what. but yeha still the amazing poetress i have always known.