Nice ending. Good job!

~Twilight Starr~

Yay! Ayrlyn came back, but the princess's brother is dead. That's sad. Poor kid. She has to feel so alone with her brother, mother, and dad gone.

~Twilight Starr~

I like how the old chant she learned as a child helps her now. Good job!

~Twilight Starr~

Yes, Ehrin, kick Cern's butt! Great job on the story.

~Twilight Starr~

So she is Cern now. I wonder if she can go back to being Ayrlyn. Nice job!

~Twilight Starr~

A princess. That's interesting. Nice plot.

~Twilight Starr~

Hmm. What's with Mohrr always being up Cern? It seems like he has a guilty conscience involving the goddess or something. I wonder what happens next.

~Twilight Starr~

Oh, no. What's Ayrlyn going to do when she finds out she killed those people? This can't be good.

~Twilight Starr~

Aine definitely doesn't sound like good news. Poor Ayrlyn. Hopefully Wind Whisper and Morrigan will find her before something drastic happens. ;)

~Twilight Starr~

Things aren't looking good for the group. Nice work.

~Twilight Starr~

Morrigan seems like an interesting character. I wonder if she will be joining the group. It looks like she will. Good job!

~Twilight Starr~

Llew is a good friend. Making that deal was nice of him. Good chapter.

~Twilight Starr~

Good chapter. Aine seems like an interesting character. I wonder what else she will do.

~Twilight Starr~

Now Arylyn's being singled out and picked on. They definitely sound like destined soulmates. Good job!

~Twilight Starr~

I love the name Wind Whisper. The poor thing. That had to be awful.

Ayrlyn is a pretty name and looks like she is going to be a great character.

Great job!

~Twilight Starr~