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| Twilight Starr 2007-11-07 ch 15,  | abuseNice ending. Good job! ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Twilight Starr 2007-11-07 ch 14, | abuseYay! Ayrlyn came back, but the princess's brother is dead. That's sad. Poor kid. She has to feel so alone with her brother, mother, and dad gone. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Twilight Starr 2007-11-07 ch 13, | abuseI like how the old chant she learned as a child helps her now. Good job! ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Twilight Starr 2007-11-07 ch 12, | abuseYes, Ehrin, kick Cern's butt! Great job on the story. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Twilight Starr 2007-11-07 ch 11, | abuseSo she is Cern now. I wonder if she can go back to being Ayrlyn. Nice job! ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Twilight Starr 2007-11-07 ch 10, | abuseA princess. That's interesting. Nice plot. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Twilight Starr 2007-11-07 ch 9, | abuseHmm. What's with Mohrr always being up Cern? It seems like he has a guilty conscience involving the goddess or something. I wonder what happens next. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Twilight Starr 2007-11-07 ch 8, | abuseOh, no. What's Ayrlyn going to do when she finds out she killed those people? This can't be good. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Twilight Starr 2007-11-07 ch 7, | abuseAine definitely doesn't sound like good news. Poor Ayrlyn. Hopefully Wind Whisper and Morrigan will find her before something drastic happens. ;) ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Twilight Starr 2007-11-07 ch 6, | abuseThings aren't looking good for the group. Nice work. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Twilight Starr 2007-11-07 ch 5, | abuseMorrigan seems like an interesting character. I wonder if she will be joining the group. It looks like she will. Good job! ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Twilight Starr 2007-11-01 ch 4, | abuseLlew is a good friend. Making that deal was nice of him. Good chapter. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Twilight Starr 2007-11-01 ch 3, | abuseGood chapter. Aine seems like an interesting character. I wonder what else she will do. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Twilight Starr 2007-10-28 ch 2, | abuseNow Arylyn's being singled out and picked on. They definitely sound like destined soulmates. Good job! ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Twilight Starr 2007-10-28 ch 1, | abuseI love the name Wind Whisper. The poor thing. That had to be awful. Ayrlyn is a pretty name and looks like she is going to be a great character. Great job! ~Twilight Starr~ |