aww i love this story but it's been dead close to two years D:

i really love this story, wow i mean i was on the edge of my chair! hope to read the next chapter soon but i think i could stand to wait a little. "a little."

Waiting for next chapter! :D :D :D

Dylan has a very cute personality. He never forgets to obsess over Nathan, even when there are bigger things to worry about, I like that. :D At least Nathan isn't mad at him anymore! I felt really sorry for him... lol LOVE chapter!

I was completely surprised by what Kyo said, and to be honest I had doubts as to whether or not Nathan actually WAS gay, but now those are cleared up, unless Kyo was telling a lie. ^^ Three gay men, a fairy, two wolves, and a talking horse. Sigh Why can't rpgs play more like that? D:)

"One step at a time, he doesn’t hate me. Next step, getting to know each other. Final step, having mad sex with him in our tent." lol I love Kyo, even though he doesn't get to speak much yet. So much goes unsaid, I suppose there's a lot to discover. But the story is very nice, always moving forward with a touch of mystery. I'm liking it. :D

Now I'm so curious about Kyo. Why did he suddenly appear and just as suddenly go away again? Did he wait til nearly dawn before he attacked? At least he's a sexy vampire, I wonder if he'll hook up with Eve? Or if he even swings that way? Ha good chapter, keep it up

YAY! Another good chapter! Falling off a horse, what an excellent way to get Dylan wrapped up in Nathan's arms. M if only everyone could be so lucky. :D The incantations seem really cool too.

Hey, I loved the first chapter for this story. Nathan seems like a great character, and Dylan has a lot of personality. Can't wait to read more. :D

Okay, I confuse myself because I somehow got the notion that Chapter 4 was the lastest chapter you updated. I don't know how I managed that, but I did. And then I glanced at your story again and was like OMFG EIGHT CHAPTERS?!! and I became inhumanly excited and happy AND DAMN I REALLY LOVE YOUR STORY. Seriously, Nathan has a few mood issues, but that just makes him all the sexier. Sigh, Dylan is so oblivious and I love that. I'm also so drawn in my storyline too. So, so love it. :D
Can't wait for the next chapter! :))

Holy shat, I love this story. Seriously, MAKE DYLAN AND NATHAN GET IT ON SOON but not too soon! more sexual tension-n-n-n-n...:D
I love the plotline and the mystery. It's so well told and Dylan makes me laugh. I'm totally craving for the next chapter :)

Aw, your welcome. I AM a wonderful fabulous reader, arn't I?

Lol.

Cool chapter. I love the fake fighting and chapter title. Lol. I don't know if I would want to watch the not-me die... Maybe. The morbid side of does though. ^_^ Please update soon!

Whe! update plz! Love the story, it's very cute.

I'm so glad you updated! I really enjoy this story though i'm slightly confused cause it's been so long, but i'll go back and re-read everything! Its certainly not your best chapter ever, but it does move the story forward and that i found is the best way to get through writers block, just forge ahead and get it done and then it will get better.

yay! New chapter ^_^

"I jump of the horse and he shouts. I turn to look at him."

'off' the horse, perhaps? ^_^ that's the only one I found. Short chapter but that's what writers block does, hey? Know exactly what you mean. I find it gets easier and easier if you just start slow and keep at it, writing and trying to break the block.

Cheers and good luck with the next chapter! I'm excited at your little hint about it ^_^