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Reviews For: A Senseless World

Matt
2008-02-28
ch 1, anon.
abuseit's true how sometimes we deaden ourselves so much to pain, that we forget to feel. ugg. medication isn't the solution to life's problems. i only take things when i'm too ill to just let it heal itself, and that's pretty rare, but i understand what you mean.
sk8rgrl
2007-01-15
ch 1, anon.
abusegood solid point that makes you think. Well done. I like this stretch into different poetry styles, wanna write some more??;)~sk8rgrl
no one
2006-12-05
ch 1, anon.
abuseThis is really good, I can see the point you're trying to make. i agree with you that even if we say we accept imperfection and weaknesses, deep down we don't. But I don't think there's anything wrong with stopping some discomfort. Just because I've never "had the cold" doesn't mean that I can't feel emotions anymore. There's a line between one and the other, and while some people have crossed it, most have a foot on either side.
Anyway, still good. Thanks for making me think!
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