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| Matt 2008-02-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseit's true how sometimes we deaden ourselves so much to pain, that we forget to feel. ugg. medication isn't the solution to life's problems. i only take things when i'm too ill to just let it heal itself, and that's pretty rare, but i understand what you mean. |
| sk8rgrl 2007-01-15 ch 1, anon. | abusegood solid point that makes you think. Well done. I like this stretch into different poetry styles, wanna write some more??;)~sk8rgrl |
| no one 2006-12-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is really good, I can see the point you're trying to make. i agree with you that even if we say we accept imperfection and weaknesses, deep down we don't. But I don't think there's anything wrong with stopping some discomfort. Just because I've never "had the cold" doesn't mean that I can't feel emotions anymore. There's a line between one and the other, and while some people have crossed it, most have a foot on either side. Anyway, still good. Thanks for making me think! |