Reviews for The Story of a Broken Heart

Reviews For: The Story of a Broken Heart

call me ish 2006-12-25 ch 1,	abuseso... wanna stop stalking me and writing about my life..? up until The End I was liking this, because of that, that killing part that i can relate to so much (but how i wish i couldnt), i love this now. (you don't even know) you're great as always
angel953 2006-12-14 ch 1,	abuseThis poem ios very depressing miss Caitlin. It could be because I'm listening to a depressing song at the same time, but i think it's the poem. I think you're trying to bring me down to your state of depression. MEANY!! just kidding. it is a depressing poem though. "Life was perfect, and I smiled all the time. Just thinking of him made me laugh." I'll vouch for that one.
tsarevich alexei 2006-12-02 ch 1,	abusewow. rather depressing, especially at the end there. I liked it a lot though, It had depth. Great work. In answer to your question, I moved to NYC in late October. So you live in Boston? Thats cool. I lived there for only a short amount of time. I've got a better job here, and share the rent payment with a friend, although there's three of us. Anyway. Thanks for reviewing!
Lil'Fleur 2006-11-29 ch 1,	abuseI like it. It's like if it was me who wrote the chapter 1&2. Continue writing, you're good !
Travis C. Eckert 2006-11-29 ch 1,	abuseWell obviously about Randy. Anyway when you are "in love" with someone. You tend not to notice any flaw with them.
heartbroken922 2006-11-29 ch 1,	abusewow i love it. at the beginning i was like 'aww she's happy' and then at the end i was like 'aww she's sad' but i felt really bad because i know what its like and its the most painful thing ever because no medicine can cure a broken heart.
Ariannabell-the one that di... 2006-11-29 ch 1,	abuseWow, story of my life right now, glad to know i'm not the only one with problems like this. Very well written to. your last line just gave me shivers. Thanks very much!

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