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STFU 2008-04-13 ch 10, anon.	abusei, the loyal reader, do indeed desire an update of sort if such a desire is requited don't be a stranger, eh kid?
Lauren Wolfe 2007-08-30 ch 10,	abuseOh-mi-gosh, the developments! The DEVELOPMENTS!! Ahh, so cool. ^_^ You should update fater! And moar! ;O; Hehe. Rock on! :)
Lauren Wolfe 2007-08-30 ch 9,	abuseSweet, sweet, slowness...I like how you develop the fic, to say in the least. Rock on! :)
Lauren Wolfe 2007-08-30 ch 8,	abuseFor some reason, this chapter seems pretty familiar to me...must be because of all the Japanese anime I've been watching ^^; Cool. :)
Lauren Wolfe 2007-08-30 ch 7,	abuseI like the jealousy bit...hehe, so great! n.n
Lauren Wolfe 2007-08-30 ch 6,	abuseI think that "Lea" and "Esme" [the names] have been used a little too much here...and the chapter leaves the reader pretty much exasperated on what's happening between the two. Which is great, because it keeps us hooked xD
Lauren Wolfe 2007-08-30 ch 5,	abuseCool. ^_^
Lauren Wolfe 2007-08-30 ch 4,	abuseI just love the way you actually drag the reader into the story! So cool ^_^ Rock on! :)
Lauren Wolfe 2007-08-30 ch 2,	abuseCool way to start off; not many fics would actually do this, considering the err, common start-off point ^^; hehe..
michelle 2007-07-19 ch 10, anon.	abuseHey :) I've read the blurb/summary of this story a lot of times but I never actually read it.. until last night where I couldn't sleep and I found it again (coincidence) so I thought to myself.. after scrolling through it and passing by your story again I chose to read it. And I'm very glad I did! The characters are so endearing, cos they're so realistic. In the first few chapters, when Esme was dealing with conflicting feelings for her best friend.. that was so real, and I could completely relate because I'm going through the same thing. And yes, my best friend has a boyfriend also. But unlike Lea, she doesn't drop hints .. like when Esme says 'Noone's good enough for me.' and Lea goes 'but me' or something. ahah those lines make me smile : ) I hope you update soon! This story's getting really good, and its quite hard to find well written chaptered F/F stories on here, especially about best friends. I read once, that everyone fall in love with their best friend somehow, its how hard you fall that really determines the relationship.. seems quite true. Sorry this isn't much of a review, cos I really don't have much criticism of this story, except the time it takes for you to update! I'm hoping for a happy ending, but thats cos I'm a sucker for romance and its hard to find happy ending F/F stories. UPDATE SOON. Keep up the great work, Lea and Esme both seem so real, I can just picture everything.
PrettyAwkward 2007-07-03 ch 10,	abuseWonder what the note said, probably calling her a name or something, good chapter. Update soon.
Alex J. Finn 2007-07-03 ch 10,	abuseCool, you used the perspective breaks. It would've sucked if you hadn't, I reckon, coz otherwise I'd be like stuck with one person's POV and be bored. And you probably wouldn't have had a lot to write about. Re: the whole detail thing -- not sure if you added any or kicked some out but it all works pretty well here. You've got a nice pace etc going on... the only thing that could do with some going-over are some of your sentences that I think could use an extra word/punctuation to "clean up" the flow a bit, like this one: "She doesn’t have a watch on her neither does she care enough to look for a clock..." and there was another one but I can't find it now. Soh... chapter 11 thx!
EndlesslySheSaid 2007-06-02 ch 9,	abuseAww this is so adorable! I really enjoyed reading this and I'm hoping it won't take you too long to update, because I want to see them together more often! They're cute! Of course, I also want to read the drama they're gonna have to face, because drama is always good (well, it is when it's fictional and stuff). Keep it up =) Lotte
atticus 2007-05-13 ch 9, anon.	abusegreat story and i applaude your flourishing yet unattended plot and character development... start updating sooner! i wish dealing with these situations in real life were as easy as reading about them
And-on-Anonymous 2007-04-25 ch 9,	abuseHey, i reviewed before under the name Green Eyes- I had to change it though when I got myself an account. Just wanted to say that I'm glad I found this story again- i forgot the name of it and haven't read it for ages, so sorry for the lack of reviews from me... It was nice to have lots of chapters to catch up on though. It's still pretty dreamlike :) Looking forward to the next chapter. One question though, did you have an outline for this story before you wrote it or is coming together as you write it? I'm just intrigued because it's so dreamlike, I don't know why but it makes me feel like no one knows whats going ot happen next in it.

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