AWESOME story-in both senses. It's well written and has a great plot. Original. Nice work.

Twilight Starr

Absolutely wonderful. I love how the girl was horrified by the character's life, but ended up wanting to play the game when she learned about it. The ending was excellent. I especially loved the last line, "Our coffee had gone cold"

A very interesting concept! I like the build-up of suspense here and the great startling ending.