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| lil'mama617 2008-01-06 ch 2, | abuseI really liked you're story. It was good. There were a few errors hear and there but it was great! |
| xbluxmoonx 2007-05-16 ch 1, | abusepretty good story. the whole perspective with the "you" is throwing me off slightly, but it's still very different and new. i hope it leads somewhere and the narrator is someone important, because it wouldn't really make any sense, yknow? anyho, i still like it so i'm adding it to my C2, yeah? |
| amanda288 2007-03-21 ch 1, | abuseHey! I really liked this story. I hope you keep on writing. I can't wait to see what happens. |
| Limited Edition 2007-01-14 ch 1, | abuseClearly inspired by Anne Rice. Overdone story. The only twist is the perspective, which actually is completely insuitable for the story. The grammar is also off at the dialogues. The name Kain is taboo for vampire stories. But the descriptions are nice...? Good luck! |