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Serason 2008-04-23 ch 10,	abusetapping microphone Hello? Hello? Is this thing on. It is? Oh, then let's get started. I don't think introductions are nesasary, since you know me imtimately, but then again... who doesn't? I am Landon Evermonte, of of Evermonte Incubi's. Now that we know one another let's review... Bip, what a nice name for a horse. I knew a horse once. He was a lovely lover, not to cruel or heavy. I once was able to go for... Oh, you don't what to hear about that do you? I think one of my favorite lines is, "It was akin to going a day with his shirt off." I wouldn't mind seeing that. lol. Now as for this "Nerin" character. He's my God. I know that Tetsu is my boss and all, but Nerin knows just what do say to get my Demon blood boiling. Now this Teran Filma... Where can I purchase one? I'd certainly like one, in pink or yellow if possible. Maybe I could get Talan to buy one for me... What do you think? This Ruiki and Maken pairing seems strangely familar to me. But I have no idea why. I feel your pain Ki-Rui, I feel your pain. Maken is such a great mean, villianous character, but I still like him. And I can see why Ruiki does too. In fact if I didn't have Talan back home, I might put in a bid for a night with Maken myself. What? NO love for Ruiki. Maken that sucks. Don't you dare have your way with that Creationisterist... or whatever she'll called. Ruiki loves you. YOU BIG MEANIE. Ruiki and Maken better get together, or I'll be really really upset... and I'll give Sal a nasty tatoo, you don't want that do you? Yeah.
nothinglikethesun 2007-06-11 ch 9,	abuseYay! an update! eh heh heh... I ask too many questions. >_< what can I say, I'm a curious person. Pretty cool chapter, though. I understand everything this time though, so no questions lol. I like the direction the story's going, can't wait for the next update! Hopefully now that you have school out of the way you can focus on what's really important, lol. I'm really sorry to hear about your boyfriend, but if he is so stupid as to dump someone like you, I think you're better off without him.
Serason 2007-06-09 ch 9,	abuseI'm so glad you're back and all in one piece, even if "his" stuff isn't. Tehe. You you come back you come back with a bang, you know just what to say, and what do make your characters do to tug on the heartstring of your readers. I cried when I read this chapter. Ask me when was the last time I did that? I'll tell you, Never. Maybe when I watched Bambi as a kid, but never while reading a book. You're that good. I want Ruiki to be happy again. I want my perky little red head again. Darn you Maken, darn you to HELL. I read this too fast, to give a proper review. But I already told you the things I liked. I'm planning on re-reading Nisera's little history lesson later, because it was WAY too long for a late night reading. I can't wait for Esalno to be updated and the next chapter of this. You've got me hoked, I'm here to the end. I can only wait and wonder where you're going to lead me. Faithfully yours, Serason
JuN 2007-03-17 ch 8, anon.	abuseMy house caught fire once at night so I know how scary it must have been for Keira and Ari. But for me it was a minor fire and the damage wasn't that bad, though we did lose a few pieces of furniture. Our chrismas tree caught fire. I'm not gay but Ruiki's cute. He's so funny and adorable, though sometimes his suggestiveness creeps me otu. Hurry up with the next chapter we're all dying here!
JuN 2007-03-17 ch 7, anon.	abuseAgain, Nerin is cool. I just wish he'd be a little nicre to Nisera because he's cool too. Ack his hand and arm died that must suck... talk about 'dead weight' ahahahaha... oh well not funny but I tried.
JuN 2007-03-17 ch 6, anon.	abuseLet me connect the pieces... oh yeah It's MAKEN! I'm so excited.
JuN 2007-03-17 ch 5, anon.	abuseI have to say this again: NERIN IS SO COOL. His entire pasage about Alitair was sweet. When will we see her? What's she like? I'm curious!!
JuN 2007-03-17 ch 4, anon.	abuseI've had a awkward breakfast like that before. I was with my llder sister and her boyfriend. He hates me, and so does she, but neither of them were saying it so everyone just remained silent the whole freakin time. At least the toast was good. I've already read the other chapters and have gone back to review so I already know who Nerin is and I can't help but say that HE'S SO COOL. I wanna be a destructionist!!
JuN 2007-03-17 ch 3, anon.	abuseI don't have much to say in this chapter except good job. Oh and is Dirt Dust your copyright or something?? And what was the other recurring theme? I'm sorry I don't konw because this is your only thing htat I've read.
JuN 2007-03-17 ch 2, anon.	abuseWhen you were talking about parasites were you talking about me, cuz I'm trying not to be one. I was readingg this story for a while and finally got to review it becaue I want you towrite more.
JuN 2007-03-17 ch 1, anon.	abuseWhoa, pretty cool. Nisera is a pretty cool guy, and Keira is cool too. I don't like Ari. He whines too much.
Nemian 2007-02-20 ch 8,	abuseI'm back! Ok so are Ari Ruiki gonna get 2gether anytime soon so sweet :P umm i REALLY wanna type more but i don't have much to say god knows why though, oh well!
Serason 2007-02-12 ch 8,	abuseI've got nothing much to say this time. Your chapters and stories are getting better and better. I look forward to each and every one. If I may say so, Lilias might have some competition. Serason.
Rahmid 2007-02-12 ch 8,	abuseGREAT chapter. Favorite, easily. I really like supersyan ruiki, haha. And you better teach me this language, I wanna be fluent by the summer!! Then I could teach you sign language. Yeah anyway. Greatness, I'm pro Kiera and Aydran, hahahahaha and Ari-Ruiki. And also, screw all of you Nisera is cool. Rahmid
nothinglikethesun 2007-02-10 ch 8,	abuseMan, Nisera IS slimy... And poor Ari. He and Kiera just attract so much unwanted attention. At least they have plumbing now. ANOTHER QUESTION: If the entities pass on their power every few years at this celebration, why wouldn't nisera/kiera/ari be able to guess what's happening? Or do people not actualy see the entities, they just know it gets passed on? shakes head And I always though that spending holidays with my insane cousins was bad...

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