major kudos!

thta was pretty good it was short but what do i know about writiting (not a damn thing) but hey not every one has ur tlent keep writting

It sounds like the girl in the poem has been hurt in her past… Something or someone has damaged her and she is very guarded. She was obviously ‘touched’ by this guy, but is scared to be hurt. I can relate with that.
Lisa.

I'm not going to flamr you, because it's not that bad. It's simple, but I never expected the ending. I wouldn't call it disturbing, but it does make you think.