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| that one guy 2008-05-03 ch 1, anon. | abusemajor kudos! |
| larry 2007-09-26 ch 1, anon. | abusethta was pretty good it was short but what do i know about writiting (not a damn thing) but hey not every one has ur tlent keep writting |
| qblisa 2006-12-06 ch 1,  | abuseIt sounds like the girl in the poem has been hurt in her past… Something or someone has damaged her and she is very guarded. She was obviously ‘touched’ by this guy, but is scared to be hurt. I can relate with that. Lisa. |
| lronMaiden 2006-11-29 ch 1, | abuseI'm not going to flamr you, because it's not that bad. It's simple, but I never expected the ending. I wouldn't call it disturbing, but it does make you think. |