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| V. Sagara 2006-11-30 ch 1,  | abuseAmazing! There's not a thing I'd change. I can't wait to see what happens next! |
| Gypsy Pink 2006-11-30 ch 1, | abuseThis is good - can't wait for you to continue! PS: Rename the story "Captive" instead of "CAPTIVE" - I don't think you're allowed to name stories in caps locks or something. |