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Erisah Mae
2007-05-04
ch 1,
abuseNice imagery. Ambiguous enough that this poem can almost tell you more about the reader from their interpretion, than the poet from the writing of it. I love this sort of work, and you've done a good version of it.
Erisah
Nyx Raisa
2007-01-14
ch 1,
abuseOh, you weren't kidding about it being weird.

But it's a good weird.

I need to read it again...

Nope, still doesn't make any sense. Don't care. I really like it, even though I have no idea what it's saying. I love the repition of the word "Vagabond" and the nightingale. And how it's dead at the end. There's a metaphor here I'm missing, I think, but even so, it still works pretty well.
Midnight Star Lights
2006-11-30
ch 1,
abuseOMG! Wow! This is just beautiful! I have to add it to my favs now. I should read more of your work.
Taltush/MeiMei
2006-11-29
ch 1,
abuseWow. That's really good. It's almost like a song. It is a little disturbing and strange, but I love the flow and the word choice. This is great. Nice job.
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