Nice imagery. Ambiguous enough that this poem can almost tell you more about the reader from their interpretion, than the poet from the writing of it. I love this sort of work, and you've done a good version of it.
Erisah

Oh, you weren't kidding about it being weird.

But it's a good weird.

I need to read it again...

Nope, still doesn't make any sense. Don't care. I really like it, even though I have no idea what it's saying. I love the repition of the word "Vagabond" and the nightingale. And how it's dead at the end. There's a metaphor here I'm missing, I think, but even so, it still works pretty well.

OMG! Wow! This is just beautiful! I have to add it to my favs now. I should read more of your work.

Wow. That's really good. It's almost like a song. It is a little disturbing and strange, but I love the flow and the word choice. This is great. Nice job.