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| Erisah Mae 2007-05-04 ch 1,  | abuseNice imagery. Ambiguous enough that this poem can almost tell you more about the reader from their interpretion, than the poet from the writing of it. I love this sort of work, and you've done a good version of it. Erisah |
| Nyx Raisa 2007-01-14 ch 1, | abuseOh, you weren't kidding about it being weird. But it's a good weird. I need to read it again... Nope, still doesn't make any sense. Don't care. I really like it, even though I have no idea what it's saying. I love the repition of the word "Vagabond" and the nightingale. And how it's dead at the end. There's a metaphor here I'm missing, I think, but even so, it still works pretty well. |
| Midnight Star Lights 2006-11-30 ch 1, | abuseOMG! Wow! This is just beautiful! I have to add it to my favs now. I should read more of your work. |
| Taltush/MeiMei 2006-11-29 ch 1, | abuseWow. That's really good. It's almost like a song. It is a little disturbing and strange, but I love the flow and the word choice. This is great. Nice job. |