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| DarkBlysse 2007-06-05 ch 1,  | abuseWow. That one really makes a statement. The only part I had a problem with was: "Little child no longer here Young woman filled with fear" because the rhythm of the lines didn't match up--at all. The rest of the poem was great, rhythm-wise, though. |