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Annie Jadin 2006-11-30 . chapter 1
Excellent poem! Your words have a special lilting swing, just like the music you talk about. Just one suggestion...I would take off the period at the end of the second to last line, making it:

Play me the Blues
And Swing.

I like the flow better that way, as a reader. What do you think? Anyway, awesome poem, I love it!
Kawaiiism 2006-11-30 . chapter 1
Absolutely beautiful, it has a very nice melody to it.
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