I really like your writing style. you're very descriptive and every word seems carefully chosen, which made for an interesting read.

great topic, insightful perspective, thought-provoking

I was a little confused at times with the timeline, but I figured it out, and actually it was a really creative way to progress the story

im very impressed

I love it. You're a really good writer and I've always liked the style of your writing. It brings out the realism of everything. It's not as depressing as Ten, and I love how the ending gives a little of hope.

ed to my faves.

-MD

It was depressing. Almost breathtaking at the same time.

Intresting really, in a morbid kind of way, the Great Depression. We're learning about The Roaring 20's and such right now, and no one in my class can seem to comprehend the gravity of it, that people who once had everything, lost it all, bam.

Maybe if they read something like this you know? Make it more real. That's what this was, real.

Amazing job. Really do hope to see more from you if they're all this good :)