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Sir Pebbles 2009-04-08 . chapter 1
Whoa, this is cool! I like the style set. Very interesting. Particularly the ending. Good job. :)
Raincharm 2008-06-21 . chapter 1
I love that you centered the poem-it adds to its meaning.

This...is one of the poems that has so much to say, that can be understood so completely, that there really aren't words for describing it.

I think the spider is something else, and something significant. It is a dangerous and alluring world in its words.
Hed in the Cloudz 2008-02-23 . chapter 1
Your poems are like art from the moment you look at them! This one just seems like a spider, hanging from her web, and the words seem to capture the mindset of a spider. Just the fact that you've made me imagine spiders as having minds, especially calculating, frightening ones such as this, means that this poem is brilliant. Again, some of your punctuation confuses me-- the dashes before some lines especially-- but I see why you're using it and it may well be essential to the poem's comprehensibility! (if that's a word!)
Another review courtesy of the Review Marathon. My profile still holds the link!
Cloak-of-Shadows 2007-03-19 . chapter 1
I couldn't help but smile when I read this. I smashed a spider just ten minutes ago. Extremely interesting setup you have for the poem as well. You even organized the hyphens...
classic violet 2007-01-17 . chapter 1
oh, I like it!

especially: "-Come closer, let me feed / I am / Inhuman."
pixieofdarkness 2007-01-11 . chapter 1
i liked this poem alot, the way u used the same phrases, well, not same phrase, but it was the same format and style, i liked, it gave it a nice flow.
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