|Reviews for peaches|
| thoughts of candy 7/30/08 . chapter 1
omg, love this. it's so... i don't even know.
true maybe? it sounds like the truth.
| gold against the soul 12/22/06 . chapter 1
Gorgeous imagery in stanza two, and a lovely concept for a poem. I like the way 'air' is left hanging in the air. Lovely stuff.
| this is britt 12/4/06 . chapter 1
I love it. it's like a painting. the last part stings. like your new pen name, by the way
| no.peace.los.angeles 12/1/06 . chapter 1
Interesting poem. I really love the lines about the newspaper spread out on the table and gutted open. That is just the coolest description I've read in a long time. Fabulous verb usage there. The stanza about eating the peach is also fabulously done, and the way you rhymed skin and chin was subtle and nicely done. Great piece. Keep writing! :)
| lronMaiden 11/30/06 . chapter 1
your wording is very catchy and lyrical. I like this very much.