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| Calliope Rae Marksbury 2006-12-01 ch 1, | abuseMy first love told me that we had to break up because he was afraid of his feelings. This one really hits home. Wonderful job, but, maybe you should stop running? |
| KingdomRain 2006-11-30 ch 1, | abusehm... i like the ending lines and think the poem has a nice flow to it. |