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| Alexis Albery 2007-01-27 ch 1, | abuseNicely done. I liked the bird references; gave the whole thing an airy feel but the whole drama of it gave it gravity. So there you go, you've achieved airy gravity. But anyway, it was great. |
| Sakka-Fenikkusu 2006-12-02 ch 1, | abuseBoo! *pops out of nowhere* This rocks! *disappears* ... *appears again* This really rocks! ^_^ *disappears again* |
| tesa131313 2006-12-02 ch 1, | abuseI love this poem it's brilliant! I like how to used the metaphors of birds. The imagery was great I loved it. The word choice intesified the beauty of this poem. The story was fantastic five stars * |
| A. E. Custer 2006-12-02 ch 1, | abuseGreat visual, though perhaps you should consider adding more |
| Mistress of Eternity 2006-12-01 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful storytelling. |