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Reviews For: Like Falcons in Flight

Alexis Albery
2007-01-27
ch 1,
abuseNicely done. I liked the bird references; gave the whole thing an airy feel but the whole drama of it gave it gravity. So there you go, you've achieved airy gravity. But anyway, it was great.
Sakka-Fenikkusu
2006-12-02
ch 1,
abuseBoo! *pops out of nowhere* This rocks! *disappears* ... *appears again* This really rocks! ^_^ *disappears again*
tesa131313
2006-12-02
ch 1,
abuseI love this poem it's brilliant! I like how to used the metaphors of birds. The imagery was great I loved it. The word choice intesified the beauty of this poem. The story was fantastic

five stars *
A. E. Custer
2006-12-02
ch 1,
abuseGreat visual, though perhaps you should consider adding more
Mistress of Eternity
2006-12-01
ch 1,
abuseBeautiful storytelling.
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