COOL! I love this! Great job!

Very good again. I like your writing style and I like the last stanza, it gives it an end, like a motto. The things you write about are interesting, I am intrigued to find out more about you. wow, big word. Anyway I think you shoud write a profile, because I say so. Sorry, keep writing.

Well I find it incredibly interestingn how you set up the stanzas and what the subject is. It's chilling. Wonderful poem...

This little story is good. It's a bit confusing, but it's good nonetheless. I don't think I really like the last little stanza because I don't think it should have to be stated outright, but I guess that it's pretty much a requirement when the entire poem/story comes from that.