 X.xPrincess.Midnightx.X 2006-12-03 . chapter 1I like how you described her in this, it's very sweet and pretty passionate. The lines in this flowed pretty well, great work. |
 I Pinky Promise 2006-12-01 . chapter 1Aww this was great. I love how descriptive you were. :] |
 Sakka-Fenikkusu 2006-12-01 . chapter 1Amazing. Very pleasing to read. Good job.
-The Crazy Phoenix |
 asher02 2006-12-01 . chapter 1Lovely, great job |
 pukein ivy 2006-12-01 . chapter 1That's really sweet you wrote a poem in her beauty. =] Loved it! |