 no.peace.los.angeles 2006-12-01 . chapter 1Wonderful poem. I really enjoyed the personification in the first stanza of the ocean, especially how she "vomited" fish and debris out. That is just a great visual. The introspectiveness of the second stanza is nice, too. A stark contrast from the first stanza, because everything is calm now, compared to the rage of the first stanza. Just nice work. If you're not on my favorite authors already, you are now. Keep writing! :) |