This was really beautiful, excellent characterization! The details were exactly the ones the story needed, exactly when the story needed it. I'm glad you didn't feel the need to get so much into colors and physical descriptions, this didn't need that. The way you discussed more abstract ideas was really wonderful, I can't stop thinking about the idea of being able to teach grace. That blew my mind. Fantastic writing. I'm really glad I read this.

Good story. It made me smile. ^^

Good luck with writing and life.

Have a wonderful day. :)

~Twilight Starr~

You're right. It is hard to tell what it is. But I like the extended metaphor idea. I think that it is a very beautiful and inspiring story; reminding us that no one is perfect and sometimes we will fall but we will always be able to rise and try again. I can't wait to read more of your stories!

awws that's so sweet! great oneshot, i really loved your sensory details in this. fixable is a magicall word, that it is. so much full of hope and the thought of regaining what you had lost, i think it means. once again you did an excellent job, so keep writing!

It may be kind of corny, but I have tears in my eyes right now. Your story is absolutely incredible, and looks so deep into something so simple. There are many who can learn from this (I just did). Thank you!

I love it, its really good and makes sense to me.