 Mrs.Teacup 2007-01-09 . chapter 3This is going pretty good. Please don't get upset, but I'm not sure that I liked the way that you described Lana and Isobel. You were right about Lana being the leader and Isobel being the quieter one, but there was just a couple things that I wasn't sure about. But, like I said reviewing your other story, it's your story, so the way you make the characters is your choice. Anyway, please update soon!
P.S. 'She knew that her sister had the brains' > This line affended me just a little bit...lol...j\k |
 SirWade 2007-01-03 . chapter 3Very, very good!! I love Lana & Isobel! I can't wait for more, UPDATE SOON!! :) |
 SirWade 2007-01-03 . chapter 2Hey! It was a very good chapter!! I can't wait for more!! Sorry I didn't review sooner, I thought I had the story on my alert list, but I haven't been getting any alerts. Sorry! |
 Mrs.Teacup 2006-12-02 . chapter 1This sounds really good so far(kind of familiar...lol) Please, update soon! |
 SirWade 2006-12-01 . chapter 1Hey! An awesome idea, I had never thought of doing this storyline as a story! I love it so far!! UPDATE SOON!! |
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