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Reviews For: City Nights Country Mornings

life like whoa
2007-07-15
ch 1,
abuseI like it.
even the ending.
I don't exactly live in,
a large city with big lights
or anything close to it.

but the imagry I get from
this piece really helps me
put myself in your shoes with
this.

very nice.
Lauren Wolfe
2006-12-24
ch 1, anon.
abuseThe over-all poem is good, and you've done a great job with the mood once more n.n The ideas, though, are a bit confused, jumbled, but that could be what you wanted to show for all I know ^^;; Great write! Keep it up! ^_^
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