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| life like whoa 2007-07-15 ch 1, | abuseI like it. even the ending. I don't exactly live in, a large city with big lights or anything close to it. but the imagry I get from this piece really helps me put myself in your shoes with this. very nice. |
| Lauren Wolfe 2006-12-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseThe over-all poem is good, and you've done a great job with the mood once more n.n The ideas, though, are a bit confused, jumbled, but that could be what you wanted to show for all I know ^^;; Great write! Keep it up! ^_^ |