|Reviews for Insomniac's Dream|
| MacNWoody 3/25/07 . chapter 1
this kind of reminds me of me...except I usually don't jump around on my bed or my brother would kill me, haha...I'm assuming the pill thing is sleeping pills?
| Continuation 12/4/06 . chapter 1
How can you turn dancing on your bed into a bad thing? Haha, glow in the dark stars rock my socks, mainly cause they are so entertaining and glow in the dark-y. Well, at least you got to go to sleep, hey? Btw, what was the pill thing all about?
| frailty 12/2/06 . chapter 1
"Staring at the ceiling
Watching the cracks turn into
-I love these lines, they make the poem right from the begining...
| Dolvich 12/1/06 . chapter 1
Very well done, descriptive.
I like the images you use, as well as how the poem actually looks.
(Hope you've gotten some sleep)
| Love Over Gold 12/1/06 . chapter 1
Eh...this was alright. The rhythm to it was unique, and the idea was new to me. As I read it, though, I kept wanting to read something that was more comical (I mean you did hit your head on the ceiling...and you're dancing on the bed!), but at points the descriptions seemed less interesting and more serious. Do I make sense? Probably not, but I hope you appreciate this review regardless. _ Have a nice Christmas...or w/e else you celebrate.