this is very sweet and beautifully written... I really like the aquamarine line... great job

Such exquisite longing! The words create images that tug at our heart strings and touch our very soul.

I love the opening stanza for this piece; eyes are like pools, and windows, and to swim through them, to find someone, and connect with them. I love that idea. A beautiful piece, wonderful work. Keep it up.

Much love,
Juliet.