 S.C.R.E.A.M.I.N.G. 2006-12-30 . chapter 1This poem has really got me thinking. It seems shallow, like there's more to this person, only there just... isn't. It reminds me of someone like... if you watch Scrubs, Jordan, maybe. But this was great, I know that somethings good when it sticks with you for a while.
--ALly |
 TwistedDreamz 2006-12-27 . chapter 1This reminds me a bit of the ice queen from the Chronicles of Narnia... It has a nice short length, without leaving anything out, or taking away from the poem. I also think it's true that everyone can relate this to someone, while at the same time, it doesn't necessarily mean that the person is that way, it just means that we have resentment towards them for some reason... If you know what I mean... |
 Orual 2006-12-01 . chapter 1This is rather like a fantasy poem. It doesn't remind me of anyone I know, though I can certainly see the Ice Queen as a real person. Nice job with the rhyme, as well. |
 silentscreamer07 2006-12-01 . chapter 1oh wow! I loved this..it is a bit fantasy, but theres something about it that really makes you like it. You can't help but to be drawn into the poem and want to read. This would make a good storyline for a character or something, you know?
I loved those last few lines, I'm not sure why...I guess it's b/c everyone out there has a bit of an ice cold heart in them...although thats not true..I guess its more..that people like to "think" they're that cold person, who can walk alone..when really, we all care..heh, sorry, I know I'm getting confusing. This was really great though, so no worries! *keep writing*
~Britney |
 okalright 2006-12-01 . chapter 1cool, now ive got an image of this lady, who kinda looks like rosanne barr, made of ice in my head, good stuff |
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