yeah, I'd have to dido that. You seem to have a natural flow most "would be" good poets lack.

Now i'm the last one to go in a religious direction but it came off to me in that way. Seems like someone who's trying not to give into evil/the devil and in the end either does, or goes with the more positive power(whichever one the reader believes in) and wonders if they made the right choice. Interesting!

I loved this. Very expressive. Loved the flow of the poem. Keep it up!