I was wondering when you're going to update?

huh. Well, I didn't except that, but hey it is tragedy. I don't want him to die though I still don't feel too attached...I think it's because I'm expecting something to happen.

My thing isn't working right!:( it didn't tell me you had updated. I apologize

ok so i read all the chapters there were some that seem like you wanted to give up and others that seemed that you are giving it your all> but other then that you have great set up's through out the story but i am a little worried with where the story is going it seems like your adding stuff to put in it. i think that i would be better if you just let the story flow with your gut but please keep writting this story as well

OMG!! I loved that scene! You made Cylus and Sora look so cute together, it was awesome! Narathesisus is an interesting guy...I wonder why he wants Sora to be his slave forevermore.

Damn you Nara-chan! Leave those two alone!! (By the way, your sex scene was amazing!)

I see it's a filler, but I have no idea really where you're going this this except that Cylus might sacrifice himself for Sora, but hey I like it anyway. :) Thanks for reviewing my story. The reviews are much apperciated.

well, at least he finally said it! :)

Poor Cylus and being tortured by an evil god. That's really gotta suck...only six months!!

Cylus is more caring than I thought...I didn't expect him to sob, but the would be a normal reaction so I don't know why it surprised me. Sounds like it's going to start to get intersting.

The poor kid and mother. I'm scared I'll get attacted but I'll read anyway.

Wow...filler chapter, but not bad! It's good that Sora and Cylus are trying to square themselves away. I wonder what'll happen next chapter! ♥

I'm so happy you updated! I really do love this story, and I was so afraid that you'd stop writing because of the lack of reviews. But look! You have a new reviewer already- DarknessBleeds. I lived in an international school for a long time, before I moved to the States, and I was able to notice the differences immediately. For one thing, most nights I didn't have homework, lol! I can relate to Sora here.

I hope Sora smiles again soon!

This is really good. Can't wait for more. =]

Oh my goodness- you updated a chapter!! And this one was awesome too! The job offer was totally unexpected, and gosh I feel so bad for Sora and Cylus. They need to kiss and make up, haha. Six months into the story is a long time to write before the scene comes where Cylus has to decide whether or not he'll save Sora. I'm looking forward to every single chapter that you write! I'm so bummed- I wish I wasn't the only person reviewing you for your story. I really hope you don't let this story die with just one person reviewing you, because I really, really love this story. Whenever I'm bored in class (highschool student!), I always think about the stories I read and Tortured Soul always pops up in my head.

Anyways, great chapter! I can't wait until the fourth. ♥

Fictionpress is being a jerk, so I can't log into my account at the moment.

But on better news, YAY! YOU UPDATED CHAPTER TWO!!

I'm still in highschool, but when I graduate I want to be a nurse, so this chapter was very inspiring. I hope that Sora helps Cylus get over his moment- death is a very painful thing, but that's how life goes. Sora's scene where he tried to make breakfast made me laugh. Poor Sora! Poor Cylus too!

By the way, thank you for reviewing my drama (skit)! It really made me happy- I'm taking Spanish II, and I really, really want to learn the language, so I write plays and such to help me learn. I'm glad you were able to understand, at least, half of it, LOL! In case you were wondering- it's Teresa's wedding, and her mom and stalker rush into the wedding to say that her husband, Guillermo, was cheating on her with Bianca. Lots of drama, blah blah blah. I'm working on an English story too, haha.

Anyways, great chapter! I really can't wait for the third!! ♥