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| Redeemed 2006-12-02 ch 1,  | abuseFantastic. This poem did 2 things to me. First, it gave me goosebumps because it was an amazing story. Second, it made me realize how stupid i am when it comes to interpreting poetry. Keep writing, mi amiga. |
| Moondog Dozier 2006-12-01 ch 1, | abuseI like the rhyme and consistency of flow that you've created. It gives a detailed portrait of the emotion. This has marvelous sound aspects with the word placement. Vivid, and you've made it relatable through the depth of character that you've established. Excellent work. |