 rain is acidic and we are time 2009-10-04 . chapter 1and this is something like a bible.
(wine and cocaine and screen porches and weed.)
i like to think of it as a secret,
being a part of the revolution,
another sly little poetgirl.
(thankyou for giving us a name.) |
 Faithless Juliet 2009-09-06 . chapter 1This piece has a lot of rebellious, and youthful exuberance to it. I think this is the paradigm that every girl wants to be: dangerous, sexy. educated, and able to cope with being lonely, as you say, the kind of girl that gets a second glace. Although this archetype is also unsettling in her own way, she feels nothing, nothing touches her, yet at the same time she forgets nothing, and lets nothing go. Keep up the good work.
Much love,
Juliet.
Jules, via the Review Marathon (link in my profile) |
 whippoorwillwoe 2009-07-18 . chapter 1my friend read this and said,
"see what you are becoming."
i replied,
"i see what i have become."
we poetgirls are a rare breed,
sometimes coveted and sometimes loathed.
you've given the revolution's beginning a name. |
 young and the reckless 2009-06-11 . chapter 1i don't think i've wanted to be someone as badly
as i want to be this girl.
a revolution, indeed. |
 Arre 2009-05-27 . chapter 1this is incredible. i love it. |
 monster dia 2008-07-02 . chapter 1this stream of consciousness has my heart thumping like an off-beat drumline. |
 Chocolate Herrings 2008-06-02 . chapter 1You have perfectly described the imperfect. I can't number the amount of poetry mouthed girls that I know who fit into every detail of this poem. |
 generically beautiful 2007-09-07 . chapter 1and oh! how many “poetgirls” can relate.
i love how the lines all run together chaotically in a way that echoes the speaker's lifestyle. beautifully written. |
 palahniukid 2007-07-04 . chapter 1I read this all without realizing I was holding my breath and only exhaled once I reached the end. The way the lines run together like a single thought creates this enormously paranoid kind of suspense. Really, there's so much beauty in this, and so much idealism too, but without the cliche. I feel slightly sick and dizzy now... |
 don't give me no sass quach 2007-06-12 . chapter 1i love this.
marry me, please? |
 poisonous 2007-04-24 . chapter 1damn, you ** had me. i was that chick and that poem telling the world where to go. this poem is a revolution. get that ** and keep it. you are amazing. that description was marvelous almost seems like those words were spoken not written. this poem feels lived. and i love it. |
 Her Wishing Well 2007-02-27 . chapter 1Amazing detail and amazing imagery, purely amazing |
 ShadesofBlue69 2006-12-23 . chapter 1hey! I like this, it has great imagery! um yah nothing much else to say but, good job! *favorites* |
 Delirium Batharie 2006-12-17 . chapter 1Ah, yes...join the revolution. |
 Elenive 2006-12-17 . chapter 1Harsh and mesmorizing. Reminds me of a short film, I don't know why.
I find some irony in this piece, but it's muted. The messy structure coincides with the messy images. It's disheveld, but all the loose ends tie back in again.
Love it. |