|Reviews for Cold night|
| bipedalcooney 12/3/06 . chapter 1
Beautiful, I love the vivid image you create here. Awesome job, keep writing.
| Doc Blood 12/2/06 . chapter 1
Great word-picture. I'm appreciative as I write bad haiku.
| hellbentheretic 12/2/06 . chapter 1
I like it when such a small piece can have a large impact. I thought that this thing would be a haiku, but it's not; it's rather a thought on a moment. Very primal b/c of the dog and the hard 'distant burning stars.' Could be a prelude to something or what a caveman sees and hears and FEELS one night on a plain in the distant past. Good work.