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| Shalli 2008-01-05 ch 9,  | abuseOkay. Several things: 1. Selan and Sabin seem a lot alike. ^^ I love it. 2. Just a question-what stories did Nikerymis on LJ write about Zantier? I want to read them, I just can't find them... |
| Flamebyrd 2007-09-01 ch 2, | abuseDid the second half of my review come through the first time? I made the mistake of using "less-than-three" and it's cut it off on the website. (LJ is still unavailable to me and I am uncertain of other methods to contact you, so... FP review it is.) |
| Flamebyrd 2007-08-31 ch 1, | abuseI can't get to LJ at the moment, which leaves me somewhat at a loss for what to do on the internet, so I finally got around to reading this. I don't know why I waited so long, because it was wonderful! You have a very intriguing universe/world set up here (immortality! |
| Iced Tei 2007-08-29 ch 4, | abuseI loved the interaction between Zantier and Arycian! They are both such delightful characters!! Heehee, it makes me so happy that Salen is going to help Elohan. Yaay, the plot thickens~! Once more, you did a incredible job! Your writing is impeccable!! :] |
| Iced Tei 2007-08-29 ch 3, | abuseThey finally made it to The Green Plant! This chapter was very intriguing. After reading it, I felt that you've made Selan out to be a very wise character and ... I like him that way. Elohan is a refreshing character -- good natured, but troubled by things that he cannot control. I really like how you portray the Selan and The Knight's alien-ness, it's very nice, you know? You work is excellent, as always. :D Onward! |
| Iced Tei 2007-08-29 ch 2, | abuseI simply loved how you portrayed Arycian at the beginning of this chapter--the way he panicked at Selan's disappearance was very believable, and it made me love him as a character even more! (I really liked the part about him wanting to kiss Selan *smiles* It was cute, immensely so.) Oh, and the whole "Rainbow Knights" concept was very nice, it made me grin (for some odd reason) haha! Yaay! Zantier was introduced in this chapter, and I must say, I love him already. His banter with Arycian was most amusing. :] Arycian's concern is very cute. Gosh, how I love your writing. *Onto the next chapter* ^^ |
| Iced Tei 2007-08-29 ch 1, | abuseThis, my friend, was simply a brilliant start. It has me wondering why you don't have more reviews. Your writing is wonderful, and I LOVE your characters already (especially Selan & Arycian). You are very talented. Your idea is original. And Slash! Everything I love to be in a story. You've earned a spot on my favorites list. :] Now, I must hurry to the next chapter, I'm just itching to know what happens next. :D |
| lilylupin7 2007-05-28 ch 9, | abuseAww the last drabble was adorable (my heart). In fact, it reminds me of the ending of Pirates of the Caribbean 3 when Will gives Elizabeth his literal heart to keep safe |
| I'll Be Your Fairytale 2007-05-08 ch 9, | abuseI find it very hard to believe how few reviews you have had for this story as it is quite excellent. I loved the characters and the plot and everything. Congratulations on a magnificent piece of fiction. Luv, I-B-Y-F, x |
| Lady Psychic 2007-02-28 ch 9, | abuseThis is yet another wonderful, well written, and imaginative story. I even loved the drabbles, especially the last one. |
| Midnights Scream 2006-12-02 ch 2, | abuse*snicker* funny funny |