AH! U ALWAYS stop when its bout to get good! LOL OH well... ill just have to imagine it... hehe and now its THREE AWW HOW CUTE! Ive only read one other story where its three and u have made it POSITIVELY ADORABLE! I mean... Before, I NEVER thought three ppl could all fall in love! u kno? its just... idk never crossed my mind.. two is just..TWO but wutever ITS STILL SO CUTE! ALRITE so I was lookin though ur stories and I noticed u dont get many reviwes! OH HOW UNAPRECIATED U ARE! SO IM SNEAKING BACK ON TO REVIEW! YAY! lol im totaly not SUPOSED to b on.. but... HEY! my parents are distracted(EW NOT LIKE THAT their watching a movie)... and I bribe my bribe my brother so... Im good! XD ONWARD TO ANOTHER DELICIOUS STORY !

I saw the way this was going as soon as Rahdi appeared. I was kind of hoping they would find someone else to be sultan. I can't imagine it being more fun than traveling, but at least they'll be together.

I would love to hear more stories from their travels, since you more or less glossed over it. Since there are apparently djinn and sorcerers in this world, are there magical creatures for Shaji to run into as well? Atalaya and Rahdi are simply adorable. :) I have to laugh when I imagine what the people will think of Atalaya being so close to their Sultan. Can you imagine the court trying to imitate his fashion sense?

Great read

this is an awesome story!..love it!...
love how you do a absolutely cool fairytale story with a twist..kinda original and cool..

that was
awesome

Oh my god. SEQUEL! NOW!

-.- you really liked the alladin story, didn't you. i mean /really/ lol, i'm kidding. it always makes me so paranoid when i have to write a signed review, even though i do that anyways. o.- but w/e. This story's really cute. tres mignon.

Another cute one. Fluff fluff fluf *devours the sweetness* I had to look up words on this one though haha. Thank goodness for a FP dictionary. Are you really that articulate with your words or do you have to look them up as well. It must be quite a treat to speak with you in person. Anyway, enjoyed this one as I have the rest of your writing.

~Centi

I'm so happy I found this story. yay. It's really well written. Not to mention a great piece of fantasy. I can't believe it has so little reviews...oh well, just wanted to say thanks for sharing and keep up the good work!

lol, ah, gasp, can't.breath!1 lolololol

I'm posting reviews to fast--fictionpress keesp stoping me xDD

I love the dymanic of a threesome, especially a well written one. Sadly I think of a really muscular, purple skinned, midget whenever I imagine Rahdi xD Dunno why.

But I'd LOVE to see this one continued. I need a hit of romance to get my fix :DD

This was a very enjoyable story. There were very few (if any) mistakes, and it was a fun story to read.