Oh, dragon taking people treasures are the best! Absolutly lovely! Reread the part where the dragon loses his temper over and over! LOVE THAT PART! Its the absolute best part of the whole story! hehe Throwing his favorite treasure off a cliff! AHH I LOVE THAT LINE! Okay lol You seem to have a knack for comming up with names! I suck at names... How do you do it? Does it just... come? Or are they in another languge? It doesnt seem like one I kno...

Lol, I liked it.

Just before the bandit attack, all those hints snapped into place, so I didn't have to wait very long to know that I was right. Well done.

Cute!

aw!
i love this one.
hee hee.
dragon.
hee hee.
prince.
hee hee.
wizard.
hee hee.
the wizard is the dragon.
LOVE IT!

xD THE NAMES! They're like...Hawaiian. xD

More beauty from you, I must say. Adore it still :D

very cute!
i love it.
i cant wait to read more of
your work.

:]

lmao, very cute, I loved the ending. :favorites:

I loved it. Especially the part about poor Ahi'kiha playing the part of mage to keep his treasure. The only thing I have to recomend is that I would have loved for it to have been longer.