 Unforgettable-PoeticDreamer 2009-07-21 . chapter 1This is very sad but you've written and expressed your thoughts about it very well.
Nice work. |
 Erisah Mae 2007-09-13 . chapter 1Poignant and clearly carthartic in nature, this is a beautiful poem.
Nice.
Erisah |
 Samantha Kensington 2007-06-16 . chapter 1this is really good, i can really see how difficult your job must be. i like how you say "it's jsut my job", making a sort of ironic juxtaposition. i like the last two lines of this poem, too. good luck with the nursing
Sam |
 CHIIJOY 2007-02-22 . chapter 1"That someone’s life can be destroyed overnight..."
I heart-heart the flow. Keep writing. :D |
 free-to-dream15 2006-12-23 . chapter 1Aw...*tear* very nice though! |
 Taltush/MeiMei 2006-12-07 . chapter 1This is really sad and deep. This must be really, really hard to deal with and handle. It's very emotional and I love it. |