I'm a little lost on this. It wasn't as captivating as it could have been, I could see this having some real potential if you changed it up a little.
I'm thinking angelwings, should be angel wings?
I really liked the last two lines,
"Real loves they die hard
Real dreams they die harder"
Nice closing, in my opinion.
I'm also thinking there should be some punctuation.
As a whole, nice work.

-Rawr, from the Review Marathon. Link's in my profile.

hey hey

Me again.

Just to say that this is an awesome song!

I hope your x likes it!

Fifteen-days-of-bliss