| Reviews for Temptation |
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rebellious spirit 4/7/07 . chapter 1very good description, this is a type of poem that evokes images in one's mind...very nice and again unique and that is what i like about your writings...way to go. |
Avali-San 3/27/07 . chapter 1Awesome poem! |
Living.My.Life.My.Way 3/18/07 . chapter 1so true. i can relate to a lot of ur poems... |
fuzzy-logik21 1/27/07 . chapter 1i just read that 3 times and found a different meaning each time. wonderful. |
Wopaloplopyop 1/27/07 . chapter 1I really like this. It was amazing ) Cheers |
Tipped 1/7/07 . chapter 1"Let it fall/ let it drip" i like the sound of that when read out loud i like the subtle use of repitition and i like the last line "temptation" its amazing how just one word can have such an impact. keep it up. /tipped/ |
tiltillabulation 12/16/06 . chapter 1I like the disjointedness in this that really gives the sense that you're struggling against something. Nice one. |
Universal Empire 12/10/06 . chapter 1WOW! I liked this 1! I love the imagery in this piece! Keep writing! |
darkaura de shadow 12/9/06 . chapter 1thanks for the review...now i actually had to read this more than just once...but i understand your meaning behind it...rather dark i might say...i like the choice of job, keep it up |
notated descant 12/9/06 . chapter 1this is pretty good... i like how the way you've written this piece is all over the place, without much sense being made, simulating the human mind going into a spiral. Overall, i think this is really great! Keep writing! (oh, and thanks for the review!) |
kathleen30263 12/3/06 . chapter 1Good writing! |
commemorativemisery 12/3/06 . chapter 1ah yes. i know this feeling well. i have nothing more to say. great job |
bR0k3N 12/3/06 . chapter 1awesome. one word, and it was awesome. Loved the flow of this and I love the ending. keep up with the writing! ] -DBD. ] |
braindead1345 12/3/06 . chapter 1Wow...this one is...diffrent, more i dunno more...anyway, love it! |
Sephira X 12/3/06 . chapter 1I really like this, and it's format. Pretty. |