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rebellious spirit
2007-04-07
ch 1,
abusevery good description, this is a type of poem that evokes images in one's mind...very nice and again unique and that is what i like about your writings...way to go.
Avali-San
2007-03-27
ch 1,
abuseAwesome poem!
Living.My.Life.My.Way
2007-03-18
ch 1,
abuseso true. i can relate to a lot of ur poems...
fuzzy-logik21
2007-01-27
ch 1,
abusei just read that 3 times and found a different meaning each time. wonderful.
Wopaloplopyop
2007-01-27
ch 1,
abuseI really like this. It was amazing =)

Cheers
Tipped
2007-01-07
ch 1,
abuse"Let it fall/ let it drip"
i like the sound of that when read out loud
i like the subtle use of repitition
and i like the last line "temptation" its amazing how just one word can have such an impact. keep it up.

//tipped//
tiltillabulation
2006-12-16
ch 1,
abuseI like the disjointedness in this that really gives the sense that you're struggling against something. Nice one.
Sadistikal
2006-12-10
ch 1,
abuseWOW! I liked this 1! I love the imagery in this piece! Keep writing!
darkaura de shadow
2006-12-09
ch 1,
abusethanks for the review...now i actually had to read this more than just once...but i understand your meaning behind it...rather dark i might say...i like the choice of wording.good job, keep it up
notated descant.
2006-12-09
ch 1,
abusethis is pretty good... i like how the way you've written this piece is all over the place, without much sense being made, simulating the human mind going into a spiral. Overall, i think this is really great! Keep writing! (oh, and thanks for the review!)
kathleen30263
2006-12-03
ch 1,
abuseGood writing!
commemorativemisery
2006-12-03
ch 1,
abuseah yes. i know this feeling well. i have nothing more to say.

great job
Duzen Broken DreamZ
2006-12-03
ch 1,
abuseawesome. one word, and it was awesome.

Loved the flow of this and I love the ending. keep up with the writing! =]

-DBD. =]
braindead1345
2006-12-03
ch 1,
abuseWow...this one is...diffrent, more i dunno more...anyway, love it!
Sephira X
2006-12-03
ch 1,
abuseI really like this, and it's format. Pretty.

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