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| rebellious spirit 2007-04-07 ch 1,  | abusevery good description, this is a type of poem that evokes images in one's mind...very nice and again unique and that is what i like about your writings...way to go. |
| Avali-San 2007-03-27 ch 1, | abuseAwesome poem! |
| Living.My.Life.My.Way 2007-03-18 ch 1, | abuseso true. i can relate to a lot of ur poems... |
| fuzzy-logik21 2007-01-27 ch 1, | abusei just read that 3 times and found a different meaning each time. wonderful. |
| Wopaloplopyop 2007-01-27 ch 1, | abuseI really like this. It was amazing =) Cheers |
| Tipped 2007-01-07 ch 1, | abuse"Let it fall/ let it drip" i like the sound of that when read out loud i like the subtle use of repitition and i like the last line "temptation" its amazing how just one word can have such an impact. keep it up. //tipped// |
| tiltillabulation 2006-12-16 ch 1, | abuseI like the disjointedness in this that really gives the sense that you're struggling against something. Nice one. |
| Sadistikal 2006-12-10 ch 1, | abuseWOW! I liked this 1! I love the imagery in this piece! Keep writing! |
| darkaura de shadow 2006-12-09 ch 1, | abusethanks for the review...now i actually had to read this more than just once...but i understand your meaning behind it...rather dark i might say...i like the choice of wording.good job, keep it up |
| notated descant. 2006-12-09 ch 1, | abusethis is pretty good... i like how the way you've written this piece is all over the place, without much sense being made, simulating the human mind going into a spiral. Overall, i think this is really great! Keep writing! (oh, and thanks for the review!) |
| kathleen30263 2006-12-03 ch 1, | abuseGood writing! |
| commemorativemisery 2006-12-03 ch 1, | abuseah yes. i know this feeling well. i have nothing more to say. great job |
| Duzen Broken DreamZ 2006-12-03 ch 1, | abuseawesome. one word, and it was awesome. Loved the flow of this and I love the ending. keep up with the writing! =] -DBD. =] |
| braindead1345 2006-12-03 ch 1, | abuseWow...this one is...diffrent, more i dunno more...anyway, love it! |
| Sephira X 2006-12-03 ch 1, | abuseI really like this, and it's format. Pretty. |