very good description, this is a type of poem that evokes images in one's mind...very nice and again unique and that is what i like about your writings...way to go.

Awesome poem!

so true. i can relate to a lot of ur poems...

i just read that 3 times and found a different meaning each time. wonderful.

I really like this. It was amazing )

Cheers

"Let it fall/ let it drip"

i like the sound of that when read out loud

i like the subtle use of repitition

and i like the last line "temptation" its amazing how just one word can have such an impact. keep it up.

/tipped/

I like the disjointedness in this that really gives the sense that you're struggling against something. Nice one.

WOW! I liked this 1! I love the imagery in this piece! Keep writing!

thanks for the review...now i actually had to read this more than just once...but i understand your meaning behind it...rather dark i might say...i like the choice of job, keep it up

this is pretty good... i like how the way you've written this piece is all over the place, without much sense being made, simulating the human mind going into a spiral. Overall, i think this is really great! Keep writing! (oh, and thanks for the review!)

Good writing!

ah yes. i know this feeling well. i have nothing more to say.

great job

awesome. one word, and it was awesome.

Loved the flow of this and I love the ending. keep up with the writing! ]

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Wow...this one is...diffrent, more i dunno more...anyway, love it!

I really like this, and it's format. Pretty.