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| Dark Fever 2008-05-02 ch 15,  | abusei loved it, completely awsome, and the planes wicked awsome! |
| Dark Fever 2008-05-02 ch 3, | abuseits awsome so far, love clairs attitude, cant wait to learn more about officer harold! and who this stalker is and what the secret project is |
| Aznbeez 2007-03-20 ch 15, anon. | abuseI don't get the ending...it's a good ending and everything but do James and Claire get together?? Can you do a sequel where James got transferred to somewhere else and 2 yrs later he comes back and he sees Claire again? and maybe claire has a boyfriend but when James comes back she falls in love with him? I think you should do one with a bit of the military stuff in it but mainly about theire relationship? plz? otherwise i'll always be trying to figure what happened to them. PLzPlz Plz write a sequel! Aznbeez |
| Aznbeez 2007-03-20 ch 9, anon. | abusehi...i think this story is really good...it's shaping up really well and i hope you get to finish it... One question...do you by any chance read the stephanie plum books? you know since you used the name joseph ranger? just wondering...please reply in your next chapter of the story...ch.16? i think it is... Belinda |
| Beautiful Pixie 2007-02-07 ch 15, | abuseoutstanding, I loved it. |
| Ali 2007-01-14 ch 15, anon. | abuseAmericans bomb us lil aussies! How dare they?! -gasps- I love Claire's character and how she takes the initiative and beats the crap out of people. A realistic plot aswell, I could so see that happening and everyone being non the wiser. |
| KidBomb 2006-12-25 ch 1, anon. | abusecould i make a movie of this? |
| TJ 2006-12-18 ch 12, anon. | abuseWow.. i am Astounded. This is absolutely fantastic! You are really talented! |
| Pacific71 2006-12-13 ch 11, | abuseI was amazed at how good your story is, while I am familiar with most British and Australian terminology there are several that made me pause and wonder about. Milo for example, I don't have a clue as to what this is unless it is similar to our Ovaltine |
| predict.this 2006-12-08 ch 7, | abuseGreat story. Really awesome. More please. :) |
| KayB 2006-12-03 ch 2, | abuseAnother great chapter. I cannot see any faults. Keep writing and update soon! |
| KayB 2006-12-03 ch 1, | abuseI love this. And it's only the first chapter. Well, I'm off to read chapter 2. By the way, I faved this story. |