How lovely and creative your work is. It's simple in the sense that it is extremely straightforward and relies more on a kind of poetic narrative to express your thoughts then literary devices. Also, the philosopher in me enjoys your... emotional exploration of the metaphysical. I sincerely hope you will always keep writing.

I like this.. its sad, but oddly uplifting... an interesting take on death.. that i quite like... great piece

This is an interesting poem. It's almost like a conversation. I like the way you start the poem. It's thought-provoking, the whole thing. Fascinating work. Keep writing! :)

Excellent! This is full of so many good ideas! How temporary life really is! A friend once told me: Whether they realize it or not the point of all writers is influence as many people as possible throughout their lifetime. Let us all make as much impact as possible so maybe someone can even be helped once we are all gone.