Reviews for When It Hurts - FictionPress.com

criti-sized 2007-02-12 ch 1,	abuseThis is a very nice poem with very sentimental points. I liked the soft touch of emotion that was in it, and the wording that made it as great as you wanted it to be.
Mosaic Stains 2007-02-02 ch 1,	abuseThis the best poem out of all your poems. It carries the depth of emotion and expresses it clearly. Much more clearer than your other poems. I could actually feel the strength and hurt within the words. Very nice expression. ~Mosaic Stains
LeilaX 2007-01-29 ch 1,	abuseVery sad, and something that we can all relate to.
Enigmatic Margaret 2007-01-25 ch 1,	abuseThere is a freestyle quality to it, however you seem to follow a bit of a rhyming pattern whether that is intentional or not, it does fit in with whatever you're trying to convey... The loss of friendship is a hard topic to write about in some cases, with the bitterness and the angst and it gives a lot of good material. I liked the sense of rejection and hurt, you did that very well... and despite the emotion the suject seems almost detached.. L.L
Guardrail 2006-12-03 ch 1,	abuseWell written, I can really relate to a lot of this poem. Great work and keep writing.
Seventh Chords 2006-12-03 ch 1,	abuseThe heartfelt and sincere emotion really came out in this piece, I thought; and it's definitely something I can relate to as well. Nice work!