This is a very nice poem with very sentimental points. I liked the soft touch of emotion that was in it, and the wording that made it as great as you wanted it to be.

This the best poem out of all your poems. It carries the depth of emotion and expresses it clearly. Much more clearer than your other poems. I could actually feel the strength and hurt within the words. Very nice expression.

~Mosaic Stains

Very sad, and something that we can all relate to.

There is a freestyle quality to it, however you seem to follow a bit of a rhyming pattern whether that is intentional or not, it does fit in with whatever you're trying to convey...

The loss of friendship is a hard topic to write about in some cases, with the bitterness and the angst and it gives a lot of good material.

I liked the sense of rejection and hurt, you did that very well... and despite the emotion the suject seems almost detached..

L.L

Well written, I can really relate to a lot of this poem. Great work and keep writing.

The heartfelt and sincere emotion really came out in this piece, I thought; and it's definitely something I can relate to as well. Nice work!