Nicely done. Several people could probably relate to this lovely poem. I liked it, loved the off rhyme pattern, at least I think that's what it is Oo. It was short, love the emotion put into it. Nice job with this.

Though this was a very nice poem, I felt it wasn't as strong as your last one that I read. But I still felt that it was greatly structured.

The porcelain doll image. It's classic and effective, not to mention a true emotional metaphor. I wrote a short similar to this from a past member's poem, which I think you would like.

Though back to your poem, it had nice even tone to it. I think the most flattering lines were the middle verses. They put the inner feelings within the poem. Great Poem

Ah, the porcelain doll metaphor. Effective every time. Was the lack of periods intentional or not? It lends to the reader a definite sense of open-endedness which does indeed help the overall tone of the poem. Good job!

i can relate to this as a person that ppl for some reason see as perfect or as close as perfection gets and no matter what i do i can seem to shake them from that belief. Even when i do something bad, its like "omg she must have been having a bad day. r u sick hon? " lol
i like ur words, they explain emotions very well for an emotionless crystal (sorry i couldnt resist)*smiles sheepishly*

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:Does Borat impression: I like this poem, it's nice.
LOL, but seriously, this is a really great and powerful poem. Good work and keep writing!

Short but powerful nonetheless. It makes the reader think that you've really gone though this. If you hadn't said anything, I would think that you were speaking from personal understanding. Great job with this.

-nods slowly- Powerful. I like it :o)