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| messy bun 2008-05-15 ch 1,  | abuseThis was so incredibly adorable! |
| Pione 2008-05-06 ch 1, | abuseHow cute! :D I like it. |
| Chicken Paddy 2008-04-30 ch 1, | abuseHi. I know you hear this a lot, but I thought your story was very good. I don't normally read romance, but this one seemed interesting. The action in it seemed so natural, like it could be any girl on any bus. Liked your story, keep up the good work! ~Chicken Paddy |
| Hopelessly Cliche 2008-04-27 ch 1, | abuseHey! I love this oneshot! It was incredibly cute! It was good to see that Melanie didn't do a cliche' thing and say no to going out with him! Great story!! :D HC |
| kendralyn 2008-04-18 ch 1, anon. | abuse"I need to stop writing fluff, it's ridiculous" nonsense; i like reading fluff. ; ) this was so cute! |
| Evolet Blue 2008-04-16 ch 1, | abuseI don't remember when I laughed so much, the story is amazing. Everything was just, perfect... |
| Singing for Absolution 2008-04-06 ch 1, | abusevery cute. In sort of a ...I was for some reason on top of a bus, fell off and right onto some guys windsheild, that's how I met my husband...way. Akaward, but cute and very embarassing. |
| xLittleBlackConverse. 2008-04-05 ch 1, | abuseso so SO darn cute =] HAHA but where did you get the random idea? It's really different, never come across a oneshot like this. oh OH this happened to you huh? haha nice. Anyway thanks for the fluff read! |
| Beyond-the-Shadows 2008-04-04 ch 1, | abuseI love fluff! :D It was sweet- you ended it nicely/well. Well done! |
| Loud Cancer 2008-03-27 ch 1, | abuseI'm making faces at every cute guy i see from now on. :) lol. It was awesome.:D:D:D |
| Princess of Lies 2008-03-26 ch 1, | abuseThanks for planting an insane idea into the sea of debris that qualifies as my mind... Don't be surprised if you see a short girl with really (really really) long brown hair making faces at random people on buses. |
| Roman C Lee 2008-03-24 ch 1, | abuseFluff is FUN! Ha,ha I really enjoyed this; I don't think I ever would pull faces at a guy on the bus, I think it's hilarious that you did, though! This had really no mistakes in it and it was so FUNNY! You have a fantastic writing style; it's really enjoyable. I love that this ends happily, i've been reading cliffhangers lateky and it's so killer-- in the literal sense. ^_^ I'll be sure to cheak out your other stories; considering how great this one is in all ways. |
| Twilight Starr 2008-03-24 ch 1, | abuseAww, sweet story. It was great and very readable. Good luck with writing, this story, and life. Have a lovely day. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| RoseLife 2008-03-24 ch 1, | abuseaww CUUTE loved it well done ^^ |
| BluePillow75 2008-03-22 ch 1, | abuseHaha! so funny ^^ |