I believe I PMed you about being your beta... I don't exactly know if you got the message or not, but here I am offering anyways.
I noticed a few mistakes in the earlier chapters, but it wasn't anything very prominent, mostly stuff like a missed apostrophie and ect.
So if you're interested, just PM me and we can talk.
Lee

Ho yeah! I really love your story! Well yeah there's a lots of sex but it still really good XD

omg you know what? I want to read their first date! X3

Also there's a lots of "fuck", this word is not stuck in my head XD (omg, if someones were able to read my mind... ew...)

Fav*

ps.: so sorry for the mistakes, my english still not perfect TT_TT

OMFG! This story is hot. I'll say. Wheew *switch on fan* Great story! ^^ Love it! Update soon^^

great second chapter^^

thats awsome!
I love the vivid imagry.
pretty sweet!!

Very interesting... thanks for teaching me some things about sports cars ;) I'm really not into that. Did you have to do some research, or is this a passion of yours? I just have high hopes of being able to afford one someday.

I hope for more soon!

Oh, I like it so far :DD I especially liked the last part of this chapter. Keep it up! Ah, and I´ll review SmAaCmS soon, too :))

wow!! that was really good!! please tell me this is a story n not just a oneshot!

The sex is indeed great. Oh my *fans herself*

Xx

Okay, despite the all too steamy sex scenes, the story's great, partly because I love yaoi all that much. Besides, it's fun reading about Jack and Aubrey!
Update will you? I want to see what the story's all about.

I love Jack hes a wonderful charactor

ppshh who cares that hes spoilt
i think it adds to his cuteness

so far i really like the story
and i hope you continue

Oh my goodness, I love it! You are a fantastic writer, and I really love your characters!

Wow. You certainly caught my attention, which with my ADD is admittedly difficult at times. I like how you're taking things, showing that they don't have a perfect relationship and they do disagree on some matters. So far it provides much amusement and I hope it doesn't remain on hiatus too long.

The beginning is screaming "I want to shock people" or hook them by writing about sex. It's screaming a bit too much. The flow is nice and the language varied, the descriptions are very vivid and easy to visualize. And when the reader has gotten hooked with the first scene, the next trick is to obviously fit all that information somewhere. But since the sex-scene didn't get me hooked, the information sounds...boring. I like the dialogue, it's spicy XD And the happenings along with the dialogues are interesting. There is also a good balance of description and dialogue, good work on that. Damn you, keeping me from doing my homework! The sex-scene that follows also makes it boring since I expected to actually get into the conflict by now but then it goes into a sex-scene that actually isn't needed because it does absolutely nothing for the plot. I didn't catch where the lube came in, was there any lube? Heck, I have problems having sex without lube and I'm a girl. The characters are belivable and have depth, I like that. They're dependant on each other which is realistic after being together for so long, but what isn't realistic about their relationship is that their lives seem to revolve around each others. Don't they grow sick of each other? I'd throw up. The relationship described is that in the stage of after...a month or maximal six months. The plot is lost to me, I couldn't find it in this soup. Although sex is fun to read, but it gets boring without plot, at least after a while. There is nothing to build the anticipation, see? Good job!