Hey, just wanted to let you know that I read this story! Unfortunately, I'm not giving you anything else except that because I want to remain completely neutral in this "review" that isn't actually a review proper.

I'm judging Best Humour for the TiRO awards this round, and your story has now been read as part of my duties as the judge. Winners won't be announced until January or whatever, so hang tight.

This's hilarious! I love it. Sloane and Ricky remind me of my best friend and I so much. Mikey's pretty amusing too. It'd be cool if he was featured a bit more.

I love this story, it is so funny. It makes my day.

REALY GD...altho, th swering doesnt complimnt it, its stil excelent!

I know what you mean, at my school they do that all the time. The suburbs really do suck to live in, as well as the boondocks, I've lived in both. This chapter had a good point, and was hilarious.

Disney sequels do suck...well except for Pirates of the Caribbean...The second one was better really. This is really funny so far, rofl.

OH for the love of god finish the ending! LOL It was great. There were a few moments that had me laughing the rest of the day, as a tech support representative who barely has people calling, you have made my day. And Congrats on finishing Nanowrimo! (I won too!)

As soon as I read about the prophecy, I burst out laughing. A ** and a **...LOL
I agree about the numbers thing. Numbers on the end of code names IS noobish. -_- Poor Ricky and his pants, heh heh. Loved this chapter. :)
You wrote the rest of this in one day?! Woah!
- Animeniac

I really anejoyed this and the last chapter. So many humourous bits - the messed up hallucinations, the funny, surprisingly true stuff about buses, the mutliated bird... :')
Looking forward to the next one. :D
- Animeniac

Oh...my...god...

I love this story so much, I could spread it over toast, and eat it like /cake/.

Update please. =D

Heh, funny as usual. The crazy teacher cracks me up every time. :D
Um...the ending. It'd be a shame to have something anti-climatic, I suppose. Like they all just died, or something. lol
I'd like a good ending. But that's just me. Use your better judgement. ;)
- Animeniac

It just keeps getting better and better...:D
LOL - Ricky sneaking into the teacher's house. And the weird Robot Horse thing - I'm curious now. ^^
- Animeniac

For some reason the characters Ricky reminds me of my friend. I like your story keep it up!

Ha! this is funny. Ricky and Sloane r3emind me of my friends Lukas and Nia. Update!

Sorry for lack of reviews lately, I've been busy. u_u
This is hilarious! There are just so many funny bits and bobs that I can't list them all. I love Michael! Send him to my school! :P
"We can't open the window! There's no glass!" - Made my day. :D
- Animeniac